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DavidAdamson
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    21 July 2023 at 13:47
    Post count: 174
    #18587

    I agree with Dave that the picture tells a story and that you did well to get everything lined up as you wanted it. I did find however that my eye was immediately drawn to the steps at the rhs and the bright area above them. Not sure what you can do about them as cropping would take you too close to the singer.

    Best regards,

    David