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dmhyett
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    John, I may be wrong but the man with the prayer book has the stance of a security officer and his size is also consistent with this. If this is the case then perhaps “guarding the devoted” or similar might be an appropriate title. The entire scene then makes sense and certainly no need to change anything.

    Dave